(Do the translation and then check my translation below the song)
¿Que te pasa? No lo se. No me encuentro muy bien.
¿Has desayunado? Solo un vaso de leche con una galleta de chocolate.
Creo que deberías comer algo. Si, tienes razón. Vamos. Coge mi brazo y vamonos a un sitio donde hacen unos bocadillos riquísimos.
Como hace un día soleado, podemos sentarnos fuera en el sol y ver a la gente paseando por la calle. Te veo un poco pálida. Te irá bien que te un poco el sol.
¿Que hora es? Son las diez menos cuarto. Que bien! Aun tenemos media hora antes de volver al trabajo. Por eso siempre vengo aquí todas las mañanas porqué no está tan lejos de la oficina.
Que sabroso está este bocadillo vegetal!
Si te parece bien, podemos quedar a la misma hora mañana. Vale. ¿Te importa si viene mi amiga Marta?
No, no me importa en absoluto. Cuanto mas gente mejor.
¿Sabes que me voy de vacaciones la semana que viene? Que suerte tienes! ¿A donde te vas?
Tengo un amigo que vive en Malta. Tiene una casa pequeña cerca de la playa. El se va a Canadá unos cuantos meses, y si quiero puedo quedarme en su casa. Me dejará las llaves debajo de una maceta de girasoles que está junto a la puerta.
Ojala pudiera ir contigo. Me encantaría practicar mi inglés alli.
Porqué no vienes? No le se. Tendría que hablar con mi jefe. Quizás podría tomar una semana libre.
Os dejo una pista en esta canción de Pink Floyd
My Translation
Of course, other words or synonyms could be used. I will translate it my way.
If you have any other suggestions, let me know.
What´s the matter? I don´t know. I don´t feel very well.
Have you had (Did you have) breakfast? Just (Only) a glass of milk and a chocolate cookie
(biscuit).
I think you should eat something. You´re right. Come on. Take my arm and let´s go to a place where they make some delicious sandwiches.
As it´s a sunny day, we can sit outside in the sun and watch the people walking in the street.
You look a little pale. It will do you good to get some sun.
What time is it? It´s a quarter to ten. How nice! We still have half an hour before going back to work. That´s why I always come here every morning because it´s not so far from the office.
How tasty this vegetable sandwich is!
If it´s okay with you, we can meet at the same time tomorrow. Fine. Do you mind if my friend Marta comes?
No, I don´t mind at all. The more people the better.
Do you know that I´m going on vacation next week? How lucky you are! Where are you going?
I have a friend who lives in Malta. He has a small house near the beach.
He´s going to Canada for a few months, and if I want I can stay at his house. He´ll leave me the keys under a pot of sunflowers which is beside the door.
I wish I could go with you. I´d love to practice my English there.
Why don´t you come? I don´t know. I would have to talk to my boss. Perhaps I could take a week off.
voy a intentarlo pero sé que tendré muchos fallos.
ResponderEliminarWhat,s up! (what´s the matter). I don´t know. I don´t feel very well. Have you had breakfast?. Only a glass of milk with some a chocolate biscuit. I think you should eat something. I think so. Let´s go. Take my arm and let´s go to a place where they make a very good sandwiches.
As it´s sunny today, we can seat outside in order to sunbathing. You´re so pale!.What time is it?. It´s a quarter to ten. How nice!. We have half an hour beforae coming back to work.How good is this vegetable sandwich!. That´s the reason I come here in the morning. If you wishwe can meet at the same time tomorrow. Ok, Do you mind if my friend Marta comes with us?. Not at all. Ther more people the better.Do you know that i´m going on holiday next week?. How lucky you are!. Wwere are you going?. I have a friend who is living en Malta. She has a little house near the beach.Heés going to Canada for a few months and if I want, I can stay at his house.. He will put his keys under a sunflowers pt wich is nex to the door.
I wish I could go with you
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EliminarEstá bastante bien. Solamente hay unos errores de algunas expresiones o de escritura.
EliminarNo es una traduccion tan fácil......pero se ve que sabes inglés
A ver si mas gente se anima a enviar una traduccion para ver quien lo ha hecho mejor.
Un dia de estos, lo traduciré y así podréis compararlo con el mio.
Chao
Aquí os dejo la mía :)
ResponderEliminarWhat’s the matter with you? I don’t know, I don’t feel very well.
Have you had breakfast? Just a milk glass with a cookie.
I think you should eat something. I suppose so. Hold my arm and let’s go to a place where they make the tastiest sandwiches.
Since it’s a sunny day, we can sit outdoors to have a sunbath. You are very pale.
What time is it? It’s quarter to ten. Good! We have half an hour before going back to work.
What a tasty vegetal sandwich! That’s why I always come here in the morning.
If you feel like, we can meet tomorrow at the same time. Ok. Do you mind whether my friend Marta comes?
I don’t at all. The more people the better.
Do you know I’m going on a holiday next week? Lucky you! Where are you going?
I have a friend who lives in Malta. He has a small house near the beach. He is going to Canada a few months, and if I want I can stay at his house. He will let me the keys under a sunflower pot which is next to the door.
If only I could go with you.
Hay algunos errores, pero tambien no está mal. Me gusta que has usado la palabra "Tasty" = para decir riquísimo....pero tambien significa sabroso.
ResponderEliminarYa son dos personas que me han mandado una traduccion. A ver si recibo mas y entonces haré mi traduccion para q podeis comparar...y un día de estos eligiré la mejor traduccion.
HAPPY EASTER
Hola, aunque será muy parecida me gustaría poner la mía:
ResponderEliminarWhat happens to you?, I don´t know, I´m not feeling very well. Have you had breakfast? Just a glass of milk and a chocolate cookie. I think you should eat something. I guess so. Let´s go. Hold my arm and let´s go to a place where are made delicious sandwiches. As it´s a sunny day, we can sit outside in order that the sun shine in us. You are very pale. What time is it? It´s a quarter to ten. That´s nice. We have half an hour before coming back to work. This vegetable sandwich is delicious!That´s the reason why I always come here in the morning. If you agree we can meet at the same time tomorrow. That´s right. Will you mind if my friend Marta come with us?.absolutely. The more people the better. Do you know I´m going on holiday next week? How lucky you are, where are you going?. I have a friend who lives in Malta. He has a small house near the beach. He is going to Canada for some months and if I want I can stay in his house. He´ll leave me the keys under a sunflower pot which is next to the door. I wish I could go with you.
Aunque son parecidas, tambien son diferentes.....y no es una traduccion fácil, mas bien para un nivel intermedio alto.
ResponderEliminarGracias por participar..ya son 3
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ResponderEliminarAquí va la mia! Parecida también a las anteriores. A ver qué tal:
ResponderEliminarWhat happens to you? I don’t know, I don’t feel very well.
Have you had a breakfast? Just a glass of milk with a chocolate cookie
I think you should eat something. I think so. Come on. Hold my arm and let’s go to a place where the make the yummiest sandwiches.
As it’s a sunny day, we can sit outdoors in order to sunbathing. You’re very pale.
What time is it? It’s a quarter to ten. That’s right! We have a half an hour before going back to work.
This veggy sandwich is very delicious! That’s the reason why I always come here in the mornings.
If it’s ok for you, we can meet tomorrow at the same time. Ok. Do you mind if my friend Marta comes?
Not at all. The more people, the better.
Do you know I’m going on holiday the next week? Lucky you! Where are you going?
A friend of mine lives in Malta. He’s got a little house near the beach. He’s going to Canada for a few months, and if I want, I can stay at his home. He’ll put his keys under a sunflower pot which is next to the door.
I wish I could go with you.
Tambien me gusta y no está mal.
ResponderEliminarMe gusta que has usado el adjetivo "Yummy"
Oh yes, a "yummy peanut butter and jelly sandwich"
Thank you for participating, Debi
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