tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5861101092035867861.post2705482655742109388..comments2023-12-08T10:31:27.675-08:00Comments on inglés-what´s the problem: 148.) A POEM: Not on the right roadAmofhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10921844439175246223noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5861101092035867861.post-14462980537186955102012-10-04T12:26:17.655-07:002012-10-04T12:26:17.655-07:00Hi Alan,
Your poem expresses a lot of power and m...Hi Alan,<br /><br />Your poem expresses a lot of power and meaning - straight to the point. It highlights many controversial issues within society. An edgy rap poem by a talented poet. Have you ever considered performance poetry?Poetic Thoughts By Cathrionahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00717340837427440215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5861101092035867861.post-69812140908844059942012-08-08T17:29:30.714-07:002012-08-08T17:29:30.714-07:00Nice! It would be nice if you can include some ton...Nice! It would be nice if you can include some tonguetwisters... here leave you one.<br /><br /><br />Bring the brown baked bread back.<br />Big pigs in a big pig pen.<br /><br />Both bowlers bought<br />blue bowling balls,<br />but both bowled better<br />with black bowling balls.<br /><br />MY NAME IS DANIEL FERNANDO PEÑA MONTAÑO<br />MY CODE: 23061095Daniel Fernando Peñahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15716445896423145368noreply@blogger.com